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my namez iz comiczman and i am a comic writer that helpz pplz fight crimezz with my comicz

Welcome over Jake, feel free to use this section as you wish. Post your stories
your comics, whatever
also there are no Z's in any of those words

and yes i will try to keep z's out of all my wordz...oops sorry

I was debating just moving this to intros... but figured I'd let him mess up his own section however he wanted.

hahahahahahaaaaa

Nightowl in middleschool
Revelation pt. 1
Zack finely: Nightowl before he became Nightowl but after his papa died and he got his powers.
Jade: a girl that has a crush on zack, but hides a dark secret.
Tina: a vampire girl that likes zack’s guts because he saved her from a gang of wannabe vampire slayers, and she agreed to help him keep the school safe.
Andrea: a female android that Tina made to keep her safe from other vampire slayers has a personality of her own after a power surge, likes Ben.
Ben: a guy that fell in love with Andrea and is zack’s best friend.
Katy: a telepath that is David’s friend but likes girls
Hunter: a demon hunter that zack befriended.
Gabe: a ninja/student at the school that is zack’s friend, also is the world’s biggest horndog
David: a complicated young man that turns into a monster at sunset needs Katy to help him through the transformation. Calls zack midget
Logan: a guy that is one of zack’s many acquaintances and can turn into lazar.
Sarah: a mother werewolf that is a friend of Tina’s
Brittany: a girl that promised to protect Laquisha with her very life
Laquisha: a girl that seems to be a demon magnet, so zack has to try to protect her.










Zack is overseeing a birthday party at Jades with all of his friends to make sure that no demon gets through to Laquisha.
Zack goes over to Gabe making out with laquisha and asks him how it is going
Gabe: oh fine!
Laquisha: this is fun!
But after zack leaves, Gabe starts making another advance.
Gabe (putting on a French accent): now Mon Sheri…I will reveal my croissant…I will spread your pâté…I will dip my ladle into your vishi suoi!!
Laquisha kicks him in the balls and runs away
Gabe: hock!!...She is so coy…..I love it!!!
And he runs after her
The he catches up with her
Gabe: and now, like napoleon, I will DEVIDE AND CONQUER!!!
And the couple continue making out again
Zack sees that hunter and Ben are singing living la Vida loca and intervenes just as the song starts
Zack: she’s in to superstitions, black cats and voodoo dolls, I’m having a premonition, that girl’s gonna make me fall
Hunter: she’s in to new sensations, new kicks in the candle light, she has a new addiction, for every day and night!
Zack: she’ll make you take your clothes off and go dancing in the rain!!, she’ll make you live her crazy life or she’ll take away your pain!! Like a bullet to your brain!!!
Zack and hunter: upside inside out!!
Zack: living la Vida loca!!
Hunter and zack: she’ll push and pull you down!!
Zack: living la Vida loca!!!
But then he sees someone run out, but pays no attention.
He hears a noise upstairs and goes to see.
When he goes into jade’s bedroom, he sees her crying over a calendar with Feb. 23 marked with a skull.
Zack: jade? …..isn’t that today?
Jade looks back and runs from the room, still crying.
Zack tries to follow her but he finds out that she has gone.
He follows her footsteps to a tree, and sees her sitting in a tree.
Zack (floating down onto the tree): so…what’s so special about today?
Jade (starting to cry): it’s my birthday….my 13nth birthday…..my last day on earth….
Zack: now why would you say that? (Let’s jade lean against his arm)
Jade: there was a ……demon…..about ten years ago……he…he took my soul…but not after he took my virginity…
Zack: …what? …you were raped by a demon?
Jade: yes….he called himself exodus and he….he…
Zack (interrupting): you don’t have to tell me….I can’t imagine it…or I might vomit….
Jade looks at her watch its 11:57
Jade (hesitantly): zack….you know I’ve loved you since I first saw you…right?
Zack: yea…well…….wait wha?
And jade jumps forward on the branch and kisses him full on the lips.
They stay like this for about 2 minutes….but then zack hears a sound that chills his blood….the gong of a clock striking midnight….and in the brief time it takes for the clock to strike twelve times, zack see’s jade’s eyes go blank and hears something that chills his blood even more, the sound of a desperate soul being ripped from her body “no” and then she falls from his lips, and from the tree.
Zack flies down and easily catches her, but when he looks into her empty eyes…he knows that she is gone……but then he hears a deep chuckle, like a knife scraping a chalkboard….and then he looks up and he see’s the form of a giant demon, bigger than Cthulu, standing at the base of the tree, holding a glowing something in his hand.
Zack: who are you….?
Exodus: oh you must know me by now earth shaman….exodus remember?
Zack starts clutching jade’s body close to him and trying to wake her up.
Exodus: that….is merely a shell of jade’s true magic…here is jade!!
And exodus holds out his humongous claw, palm up…and a purple energy emanates from it, slowly forming a face….jade’s face!!
Zack (shaking with rage): give…..her…back…NOW!!!!
And zack flies at him with such unbridled fury, that exodus had a difficulty catching his fist.
Exodus: I’m so sorry…was that supposed to be an attack?
Zack (struggling violently): ILL KILL YOU!!! YOU AND EVERY BEING LIKE YOU!!!! NOW GIVE HER BACK BEFORE I RIP YOUR HORNS OFF AND SHOVE THEM SO FAR UP YOUR ASS THAT THEY SPROUT BACK OUT YOUR HEAD AGAIN!!!!
Exodus: damn…..you really want this girl’s soul don’t you? ....tell you what…I’ll leave you the body….all I need is her soul.
Zack: SHUT UP AND GIVE ME BACK HER SOUL!!!!!!
And zack tries to head butt exodus, but the demon catches his head in his hand and starts to squeeze
Exodus: do we have a deal?
Zack goes limp and exodus takes that for a yes, exodus drops zack and disappears.
2 hours later
Zack wakes up and remembers what happened and starts to scream
Zack: JAAAADE!!!!!!
Zack bursts into the party and yells at the top of his lungs
Zack: JADE’S SOUL HAS BEEN STOLEN!!!!
Everyone stops and looks at the lifeless body in zack’s arms.
Hunter: oh god….jade!!
Katy: no!!
One long winded stream of questions later…
Zack: she apparently was raped by some sadistic demon named exodus, and in doing so he took her soul….
Hunter turns to the others and asks the question that everyone is thinking
Hunter: can this be reversed?
Zack: I’ve only tried this once before, but it might have dire consequences…so if it does, forgive me…
Hunter: what are you…….?
But then zack starts to spin and green flames spout from his eyes….and then he is in the past…a village is being burned and a little girl’s scream rips through the night.
Zack flies at breakneck speed through the brush until he comes into a clearing where a big demon is chasing a little girl across a meadow.
Zack: GET…..AWAY…FROM…HER!!!!!
And he slams into exodus and uses his power to sap all the demonic energy from him and blast him to pieces…..but then he comes back together
Exodus: thought you could take me by surprise eh?
Zack: no…I was going to do THIS!!!!!!
And his palm starts to glow green as he touches exodus’s head and he vaporizes again…but this time permanently… (We hope)



Little jade: who are you?
Zack: I am…uh….a random hero!!!
And then he disappears through another green portal.
But when he returns to the future he remembers nothing of it and he gets down with jade at the party, then it pans over to Tina and Andrea.
Andrea: do you know what just happened mistress?
Tina: yes…the time paradox has solved itself and the confusion is at a minimum…no one but us remembers it…
Andrea: I thought so….

END
Epilogue
Hunter: hi…my name is hunter hadad and my buddy zack let me do the epilogue
For the next episode, now the next episode is all about me….no not really…just stay tuned for the next episode!!
ROMANCE!!!
Be there!!!

So Jakeie doesn't seem to be interested anymore
should we just junk this thread?

Not to mention superhero has a section and last I checked he wasn't even registered...